Wreck.
April 3, 2008
I submit to
your immutable gesticulation;
luring, and coaxing nemesis, that is.
I had my one foot in the grave
And Life has been abysmal.
With you, I’ll go.
That detrimental kiss
shriveled, and searing
’til my last blood kissed earth.
This permanence;
’tis the catastrophe
of relishing insomniac aurora.
Nick me;
to your unfathomable realm;
’til this gasp of pain leave no trace.
Oh death;
how enticing is your eminence
and to spurn your plea is despondency.
So purloin my soul
in a trice -
brisker than twinkling of an eye.







now that’s what i call poetry with a passion…i could feel your every word..
very powerful indeed
thanks for sharing it
OMG. WTF
di lang pang-nosebleed to, earbleed na rin. haha
i didn’t understand a single thing. lols. heavygat masyado to! sinadya mo to para di ko maintindihan!!! ahehe
I love poetry. You write so crafty. Kudos!
I am a poet, too.
galing!
very passionate and very strong!
the emotions are strong and was well written!
pero nosebleed ako! pootah ka!
uhmmm.. may translation po ba to in bisaya? ahehehe.. powet ka pala! wahaha… ay sori, seryus pala to
puteek! bored ka pa nyan? ayus ah!
may naintindihan ako sa 4th stanza. may insomnia si aurora, di ba? yes! na-gets ko rin! hehe.
I like this one- it speaks of the same passion as Neruda’s Love poems. I think I am going to be a regular “floater” on your page.
please visit http://www.editred.com/hatchzel to check my poems…hope you enjoyed them.